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Review Detail of SCRHunter in You Can’t Buy My Love

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I really like the overall story and enjoyed it immensely; however, the editing was not great; grammar and names that should be Angela was Andrea, etc. Another thing is, the ”hot” scenes were great; however, the overall novel would have been added to my top favorites list if there were more of these scenes; replacing “we made love” with details, instead of the word itself and then just moving story along. Since it is a mature content, these details would have boost this novel to an extra “ump” level.

You Can’t Buy My Love

sirenbeauty

Liked it!

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