Review Detail of _Shiromi_ in Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

Writing Quality [★★★oo] - Questionable... Story Development [★★★★o] - hmm..okay not bad I think. Character Design [★★★oo] - Don't know Updating Stability [★★★oo] - Don't know,just 'new' to this story... World Background [★★★oo] - ..... ---> Good novel..just only POV... It's a real issue here.I know why author using it and love how they explained this problem to others. But well can't change the opinion that POV ruined this. Nice try tho... just need 'fix'.Also I hope you can learn this from experiences.