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ChimkinNuggie
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The flow of this book is really good. everything meshes well, and there aren't any crazy messy time skips or issues. However, my one major criticism is Abigail the FL. She is inconsistent. The first glaring example of this is when her grandfather tells her the story of marrying her grandmother. The old man clearly states that she finished school and had her career until she got pregnant. Right after Grandpa finishes his story he tell Abigail that he wants to arrange a marriage between her and Daniel. Abigail's response is to complain about not being able to finish school, college, and have s career if she gets married 🙄. Its like she didn't listen to the story. There are also a few smaller times where there are similar situations. There is also a time where she randomly tries to slap Daniel for a dumb justification. And she also likes to always point out that she is her own person and is independent, yet she doesn't have the strongest backbone. She lets her family treat her horribly and lets the evil sister get what she wants and gives in even when she doesn't really have to. But all in all a good, fun story and I'm excited to see where this goes.

Wishes and Sweet Kisses

klmorgan

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an_ly
an_lyLv13an_ly

she is simple immature but this what it makes it more realistic i think

KimPas
KimPasLv4KimPas

is this complete ?

Snehal_desai
Snehal_desaiLv11Snehal_desai

is this book complete?

Snehal_desai
Snehal_desaiLv11Snehal_desai

or is there any other same story because i like this one and it is not updated for the last one year can someone tell if you have read this story anywhere else!