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2022-02-19 11:11

First 20 chapters and the story has already hit several of my wrong notes. 1. ML is a doormat. He is too humble in love that I feel very uncomfortable. 2 There are already signs of people who will like the FL even though she hasn't even met up with the ML. 3.There is an annoying character who seems like he will become a permanent appendage. 4. Etc. I hope that she can meet up with the ML soon and I hope that the ML will learn to love himself. Also, I hope that the FL will stop using the ML's affection for her whenever she wants to get her way because as it is, I will never be convinced of this relationship. I also hope to see serious survival instead of the stuff I am seeing now.

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You might want to try reading My 100th Rebirth a day before the Apocalypse if you are into the apocalypse genre with some actions and romance

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