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Caveman21
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2022-07-03 12:59

Started this novel without any expectations, and instantly was impressed. A great take on a convoluted genre that is fresh and unknowingly wanted. RQ - grammar is great, transitions are smooth, super easy to read. 5/5 US - N/A - still too new to say SD - pacing is great, the author is open about this being a slice of life novel. Yet the characters are not just dumped onto the plot. This process smoothly and fluidly. 5/5 CD - the characters are not anything groundbreaking - but are unique and each one has their own likeness. 5/5 WB - the ‘info dumps’ don’t feel like info dumps, the world progresses with the story and nothing feels rushed. 5/5 I totally recomend this to readers, I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading this novel and hope that more people pick it up as well. Thanks Author - keep up the good work.

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thank you so muchhhh omg This warms my heart i don't know how else to express my appreciation... uhm... yeah... you really made my day i'm glad you've enjoyed my novel i hope that you can continue to enjoy it tooo

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