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Kollide
KollideLv22yr
2022-01-02 11:59

I'll keep it short cause I'm not good at this type of reviews. Writing is decent, not too many useless words, yet lack of words to describe some more details, but it's okay, we can learn to improve second, Story development, to be very honest i think it's too early for a review about it. third, great job on giving us enough info yet vague abt what type of our mc are, and his past, you created a variety of paths what kind of person of mc will become and what type of past he has. Fourth, there's nothing to talk abt it tbh, you made a foundation for your future chapters to write and that's a plus.

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