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Author! At the start the story was great but you made MC very boring. Like how he talks less and sometimes become a background character. Shows no emotion. And stop with the exhibitionism fetish of his. You might have that fetish, i understand but pls thats disgusting. How he sexually acts Infront of others its disgusting. Make him a gentleman. Remember he is from a high class family and a otaku. Make him interact more but still keeping the cold facade. Either do this or your novel is going down the drain. And by the way pls make him use some kisaragi weapons. He has many advanced weapons and making him use magic all the time. Its a modern novel not a magical girl one.

Reincarnated in gate op

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