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Old Ancestor: Thrown Out By The Nanny From The Start

Break The Corn
2.6
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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

It rarely happens to me that I don't understand a book at all. Is this supposed to be comedy? A tragedy? A lesson? Maybe the jokes and recognizable quotes got lost in translation. I really would like to know what this book is supposed to be, what message it is trying to send. Can't even review this properly, Characters are stereotypes so far and MC is a non-entity. World Building is not there, normal World, all consequences of an Immortal just casually walking around are ignored.

2yr

Fra_Srf
Fra_SrfLv2

Long review Ok so this novel has 100 supporters already but what’s with the plot mc is literally a side character for all the free chaps……..and the plot is just annoying though I’ve seen similar plot from other trail read novels this one just drives me away as the motive for the adoptive daughter for accusing the mc a old man of molesting her is to achieve more fame some shallow minded character introduced right off the bat but anyway is 3 am and I’m just rambling cause of sleepiness Short review Trash characters and the main character is a vegetable for the free to read chapters

2yr
Mute
MuteLv13

Honestly, the translation is questionable, the names are butchered, but that's the best part of this trash, there's no redeeming qualities of this, i mean literally none.

2yr
DaoistTm12ED
DaoistTm12EDLv4

Don't waste your time here. The translation is really bad and the plot development is not existing so far. Try something else this one is hopeless.

2yr
LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv12

It just feels like someone crumpled a universe like a paper, accelerated its time by 15x. And let its people live in eternal torment. This has no plot.

2yr
TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

A translation mess where ascending the Heavens is easier than finding this novels plot.

2yr
Ryuukage
RyuukageLv5

I had read it and its boring. its not about the translation being bad, but just over all bad. Its like a kid wrote this purely out of imagination.

2yr
Admiralen
AdmiralenLv15

Its pretty stupid, but its honestly really entertaining MC is basically a side character in the 19 chaps weve read so far. Its just been about how ridiculously influential all his disciples and adopted children are and how theyve been doing pr

2yr
Panime219
Panime219Lv13

This is complete bs, how tf did this got pick when it has lower fans than "My Learning Has Mutated". The difference is about 125 fans, 385 for dis and 510 for "My Learning Has Mutated". Absolute bs, "My Learning Has Mutated" is better than dis garbage."My Learning Has Mutated" is garbage too, but this one is on another level of garbage

2yr
emotional
emotionalLv14

Who gave this novel a 5 star rating? I had an aneurysm after reading the first few chapters. I just wasted 10 minutes of my life which I will never get back reading the worse novel I have ever read on this app.

2yr
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