Review Detail of _oinkchan in The Shadow monarch in Marvel (Solo Leveling x Marvel)
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Mc is just interested in collecting women. The idea is good but poorly executed and some stuff seems extremely forced but it is a good ream to kill some time. ........... ....... ....... ..... .... ..... ....
The Shadow monarch in Marvel (Solo Leveling x Marvel)
AshburnDz
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I understand what you are doing. Keep it up. Eventually you will get better as you get more experience. Don't give up. I recommend you use Grammarly, it is a great grammar correcting app. They say grammar is everything, even the worst story will seem good if the grammar is top notch. Good luck!
AshburnDz:I am just writing for fun . As for collecting womans thingy it's because i tried executing The peerage Idea and what's better then peerage full of women . Although if you could give some advices i would very much appreciated 👍.
I agree with you, when a stories grammar is bad, it just ruins your immersion in the story and just frustrates you.
_oinkchan:I understand what you are doing. Keep it up. Eventually you will get better as you get more experience. Don't give up. I recommend you use Grammarly, it is a great grammar correcting app. They say grammar is everything, even the worst story will seem good if the grammar is top notch. Good luck!
AshburnDz:I am just writing for fun . As for collecting womans thingy it's because i tried executing The peerage Idea and what's better then peerage full of women . Although if you could give some advices i would very much appreciated 👍.
Harem is the worst thing, seriously, I've read so many good novels in here that were ruined by the harem element. It's not easy to build up the Mc's character in relation to multiple women, for me a harem must be around 3 women max and there must be a long period of time in between each woman. I have not yet read this novel, but where ever I see a harem tag I skip.
Adam_Dante:Harem is the worst thing, seriously, I've read so many good novels in here that were ruined by the harem element. It's not easy to build up the Mc's character in relation to multiple women, for me a harem must be around 3 women max and there must be a long period of time in between each woman. I have not yet read this novel, but where ever I see a harem tag I skip.
I am waiting for new chapters oinkchan. I am really enjoying the MC's twisted personality and waiting for MC to use other protagonist as stepping stone and other stuffs, you know. I hope for more updates.
_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
XBeastz:I am waiting for new chapters oinkchan. I am really enjoying the MC's twisted personality and waiting for MC to use other protagonist as stepping stone and other stuffs, you know. I hope for more updates.
