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UnholyMorning
UnholyMorningLv32yr
2022-03-25 18:10

Remind for all new readers! Poor writing, aimless and stupid MC too. The author is too fond of Chinese novels, because some words and sentences are in the story. For example, Conqueror Haki was changed to Royal Haki. OK, that's all my review. Here I want to give some spoilers to new readers, be careful reading this ff. Because the MC has the personality of a child, has matured from his old life, but still acts like a teenager who is still a fanboy. His wish seems useless, meaning that you can read this ff while you are eating or kill your boredom (didn't find a good novel or a good novel update).

In multiverses with Majin Buu’s ability

Mr_Pervert
3.8
182 Chs

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leonel551
leonel551Lv5

people getting mad because the novel is harem wth? dont they read the tags? why even bother to read something you dislike and leave bad reviews and mess up the author rating for no reason

2yr

Negan_5785
Negan_5785Lv1

1-Writting is decent. It has mistakes but, as i said, is decent. 3/5 2-Stability is good but not perfect. 4/5 3-The story is forced and stupid. MC joined Luffy without reason. 2/5 4-The MC, as i said, joined Luffy crew without reason, he dont use future knowledge and he is very nerfed. I mean, he asked for Majin Buu powers, and he fought equal with East Blue Luffy... That is stupid. 2/5 5-Background decent. Is the world of OP so... But nothing new, or a new point of view of the world. Just a coppy of canon. 3/5

2yr
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

choose a cool character and made it a harem. no respect ...........................................................................................

2yr
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6

Well, chapter 5 where the cringe start is the end point for me. I know you want to have shounen moment, and I do agree it's your own freedom to write how you like it. So I wouldn't say or write anything negative about it apart from saying I don't like it. Others may.. Good luck with your fanfic mate..

2yr
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

劇透

2yr
Divine_Onahole
Divine_OnaholeLv3

luffy folower,,whats the point making ff if still leech on luffy .

2yr
AuthorISan
AuthorISanLv4

I like the idea behind it, but the quality of the writing is bad. I like the idea of the MC having Majin Buu's ability's, but the fact that there isn't a limit or a way for the MC to unlock them is really terrible. The MC could just straight up go to whitebeard, kaido, big mom, garp or any of the OP characters, turn them into candy then gain there strength. There is also a problem with the actually writing fluidity. The fluidity of the writing along with the grammar mistakes (which i looked passes as the authors first language isn't English) makes for the story to be un-enjoyable and difficult to understand what's happening in the plot. Some advise I have for the author is to either set some limitations on the MC's ability or through the journey make him do challenges that he would have to complete from the ROB to unlock more of his potential powers. I also recommend using a writing tool like read and write gold or Grammarly to help with the fluidity and grammar for the writing.

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Copy and paste Cannonnnnnnn 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😮😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴[][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
p0sitv3s
p0sitv3sLv3

Pretty trash novel, I won't lie. Author says "English isn't my first language, but the grammar will be better than MTL" and then proceeds to, in my opinion, write much worse than MTL. -Writing quality is terrible, story development is terrible, it literally just follows OP canon, character design is trash, and world background is terrible.-Honestly not worth reading unless you have absolutely nothing else to read.

2yr
ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3

Can't even call the MC a beta he's just a complete moron, suppose he's like the author in that regard. ---------------------------------------------

2yr
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