people getting mad because the novel is harem wth? dont they read the tags? why even bother to read something you dislike and leave bad reviews and mess up the author rating for no reason

1-Writting is decent. It has mistakes but, as i said, is decent. 3/5 2-Stability is good but not perfect. 4/5 3-The story is forced and stupid. MC joined Luffy without reason. 2/5 4-The MC, as i said, joined Luffy crew without reason, he dont use future knowledge and he is very nerfed. I mean, he asked for Majin Buu powers, and he fought equal with East Blue Luffy... That is stupid. 2/5 5-Background decent. Is the world of OP so... But nothing new, or a new point of view of the world. Just a coppy of canon. 3/5

choose a cool character and made it a harem. no respect ...........................................................................................

Well, chapter 5 where the cringe start is the end point for me. I know you want to have shounen moment, and I do agree it's your own freedom to write how you like it. So I wouldn't say or write anything negative about it apart from saying I don't like it. Others may.. Good luck with your fanfic mate..

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luffy folower,,whats the point making ff if still leech on luffy .

I like the idea behind it, but the quality of the writing is bad. I like the idea of the MC having Majin Buu's ability's, but the fact that there isn't a limit or a way for the MC to unlock them is really terrible. The MC could just straight up go to whitebeard, kaido, big mom, garp or any of the OP characters, turn them into candy then gain there strength. There is also a problem with the actually writing fluidity. The fluidity of the writing along with the grammar mistakes (which i looked passes as the authors first language isn't English) makes for the story to be un-enjoyable and difficult to understand what's happening in the plot. Some advise I have for the author is to either set some limitations on the MC's ability or through the journey make him do challenges that he would have to complete from the ROB to unlock more of his potential powers. I also recommend using a writing tool like read and write gold or Grammarly to help with the fluidity and grammar for the writing.

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Pretty trash novel, I won't lie. Author says "English isn't my first language, but the grammar will be better than MTL" and then proceeds to, in my opinion, write much worse than MTL. -Writing quality is terrible, story development is terrible, it literally just follows OP canon, character design is trash, and world background is terrible.-Honestly not worth reading unless you have absolutely nothing else to read.

Can't even call the MC a beta he's just a complete moron, suppose he's like the author in that regard. ---------------------------------------------