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DaoistKindran
DaoistKindranLv131yr
2023-05-13 06:12

I really like the idea and plot, but sometimes the lack of continuity and constant change of plans and system is such a turn of.

Evolution of World:Super Harem

Kuro_Simp
4.4
81 Chs

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AppleBacon
AppleBaconLv2

Won't lie I clicked as soon as I saw hotel transylvania BUT it is good, the mc isn't boring, simple plot, and personally I just like his writing style but hey, everyone's got their own tastes. Try it out yeah?

1yr

TFH
TFHLv6

Kim possible? Scooby Doo?.... we are in unexplored lands boys! be ready for anything..............[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3

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Kuro_Simp
Kuro_SimpAuthor

As all authors do I have come here to shamelessly give myself 5 stars because it's hard to type on a phone and it's a harem so automatic +5 stars lol

2yr
Anime_fan1234
Anime_fan1234Lv15

It is a great story that only needs more chapters

1yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Look, this is propably the best stuff I read in this God forsaken place for a very long time. Why? Because that's actually fun. Ton of girls, simply but working concept. And mc that isn't boring. So yeah, very good job. P. S. Just a bit of nagging. I can't be always so nice and you do have objective problem. Try to keep in moderation how many things you want to adress in each chapter. If mc goes for a battle - focus more on it. Don't talk that much about future plans, new girls all the time. Because story moves too slowly.

2yr
Nontr
NontrLv12

It looks promising, more chapters . Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

2yr
LastGod
LastGodLv4

mid too many girls too many worlds a complete mess.

6mth
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Was expecting more keeps adding more girls to the harem and doesn't even give time for the others and doesn't seem to have any plot as author adds stuff mid way not for me and too much fan fiction if thats a thing its a first for me thats for sure but wish the best of luck not my kind of fic

6mth
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