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RevolutionMan
RevolutionManLv22yr
2022-03-22 07:02

Sorry but this novel very bad. Mc not evil and very low intellect and very bad story line.. Drop. I try read this 40+ chapters... Ehhhhh........

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RevolutionMan
RevolutionManLv2

he is like a dog but does not bite and there is no point in this short story

yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelAuthor

yeah, sorry about that, probably i dragged the story too long

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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. [Reminder: Spoiler Alert] This is typical transmigrated MC who are the weakest in the school suddenly become strong.. In the 1st life, he is the weakest in the school and has been a victim of bullies.. Then, he fell into a coma, and he transmigrated into another world where he became one of the top murim practitioners in that world.. At the 80 years old, he died on another world and returned to his original world.. In his original world, he has been in the coma for 2-3 years.. MC lost his some of his memories.. Since he awake from coma, the strength, power, and technique he gain on the another world is still with him, but he intends to stay low profile and life in peace.. Unfortunately, he is the weakest bottom in the food chain, so many treat him like a trash in the eye of people.. The bullies keep bring trouble to MC like try to beat him up, when that fail, they asking the gangster group that they join to destroy MC, and when that also failed, they try to gathering all top dog in the school to gang up and give him a "lesson".. And what I hate about this story is how passive his behaviour is.. He acts like a "beta".. Like everyone can bullies him if they want to.. The bullies keep coming to fight with him.. Because he just knock them out, that's it.. He is not ruthless or merciless at all.. Who would scare if that is how he acts.. Of course, the bullies will wake up and continue to harass him again and again.. There is a gangster who stabs his mom, and MC is beat him and releases him later.. But he doesn't kill or cripple him, he just beat him.. What a kind MC who won't mind the gangster stabbing his own mother.. A wimp MC.. MC is also quite stupid.. He has MAX stat like 999+ Strength, 999+ Agility, 999+ Intelligence, 999+ Dexterity and 999+ of all other stat.. But as someone who has 999+ stats for intelligence, he is very idiot.. He can't see or read the situation that his own sister has to face.. How much trouble he made her sister going through.. Or make a plan to take care of the bullies so nobody messes with him anymore, and he can live peacefully after later.. If MC really wants to live in peace, with all the bullies and gangster keep harassing him, he would never live in peace.. Some gangster (green) also use MC to destroy other gangster (red).. The green gangster intentionally let the red gangster come to the MC area and harm people there, including MC mother.. Actually, MC just pretended to be weakling, bottom of the food chain on his 1st life.. He acts like that to live peacefully and unintentionally, it have affect his sister life.. His fake friend has become his only friend is threatens his sister without MC knowing.. He also make his own group where he gathering all in his neighbourhood hoodlums and make them his underlings.. He teach them how to cultivate.. In this world, there are awakener but no cultivator.. MC is the first cultivator and mindlessly taught many his underlings how to cultivate.. Oh, right, don't misunderstand with Max's stat of MC.. MC has 999+ stat point for all his attributes, but he acts so caution.. There are three groups of society.. The strong awakener are live in best area.. The middle awakener lives in a little mid area.. And the weakest or normal people live a lowly area. MC lives at the lowly area, and there are multiple gangster in that lowly area.. And MC act cowardly against them.. He is gathering the information.. He spying them.. He not boldly rush to destroy them.. So, do you think MC is strong? Because MC acts so cowardly even though he is just against the weakest group of the society.. What the use of max stat if you were too caution.. Plus, MC has been living for 80 years with real war experience in another world.. The author acts like "MC can conquering the world if he wants to." Plus, this novel has long been abandoned.. For more than 2 years without any updates.. Even if somehow you have gotten love with this novel, you will just waste ur time, free pass, or coin..

Deputy618
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