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venomwave
venomwaveLv123yr
2021-11-07 04:05

It's very well written like all his stories but like all his stories is also full of edginess and as always the mc gets cheated on. Not for everyone ------------------------------------------::---:::::---------#+#+#-#-#-#-#+#+#((#-$-$-#+#+#-#&$&$-$&$-$-$&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&$&#&#&$&#-#-#-#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#-#-$6#-#--$-#&#&$&#-$-#-#-$&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#-#&#&#5#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#5#5#-#7$7$7$6$5$5$-$7$&$&$&&*-*-#6#7#+#-#-#-#

Lemillion In The MCU

The_Young_Flash
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46 Chs

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The_Young_Flash
The_Young_Flash作者

I disagree. Let me start by saying this novel reflects a mature mindset. You come to this story thinking Mirio will be on top of the world but what you will find is the fact that all heroes in this story are equal. Mirio is just another hero in the grand scheme of things - no different from Captain America and Tony Stark... This novel is not for immature people who don't understand that couples breakup and love is a complex emotion in reality.

3yr
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venomwave
venomwaveLv12

1st of I didn't come in this story thinking lemillion was going to be "on top of the world" , I read your many of your previous stories so it's impossible to think that. And 2nd your mc gets pretty much cheated on on most of your stories I read, this has nothing to to with a "mature mindset" and it's just a plot point you seem to use a lot. Yes getting everything right is not very realistic and becomes a wish fulfilment but the opposite is also true, too much dark and edgy is not remotely "realistic and mature".

The_Young_Flash:I disagree. Let me start by saying this novel reflects a mature mindset. You come to this story thinking Mirio will be on top of the world but what you will find is the fact that all heroes in this story are equal. Mirio is just another hero in the grand scheme of things - no different from Captain America and Tony Stark... This novel is not for immature people who don't understand that couples breakup and love is a complex emotion in reality.
3yr
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The_Young_Flash
The_Young_Flash作者

Hmm... I post like five of the novels I write... TCMOM and the MC Zeel never got cheated on... Lemillion didn't get cheated on, he and Christine weren't even together and she loved Dr. Strange from the start. You expect a broke kid to compete with the rich and suave Dr. Strange? MC:SOD is right... Tyrone did get cheated on by Tandy, but it is a condition of her powers... As for all my other novels, nothing like NTR ever showed up... Anyways, no hard feelings or anything - I kind of think its funny that I now know how all those other authors feel when people point out the NTR in their novel which is actually not nTR.

venomwave:1st of I didn't come in this story thinking lemillion was going to be "on top of the world" , I read your many of your previous stories so it's impossible to think that. And 2nd your mc gets pretty much cheated on on most of your stories I read, this has nothing to to with a "mature mindset" and it's just a plot point you seem to use a lot. Yes getting everything right is not very realistic and becomes a wish fulfilment but the opposite is also true, too much dark and edgy is not remotely "realistic and mature".
3yr
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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Cheated on MC ntr fic? Yeah no thank you

2yr
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White_fluffy_ball
White_fluffy_ballLv1

mature content is good and all but, most of the people here in webnovel are immature teenagers, especially in the fanfic section. So avoid using this concept if you can, else you will have to deal with these "NTR" spammers

The_Young_Flash:Hmm... I post like five of the novels I write... TCMOM and the MC Zeel never got cheated on... Lemillion didn't get cheated on, he and Christine weren't even together and she loved Dr. Strange from the start. You expect a broke kid to compete with the rich and suave Dr. Strange? MC:SOD is right... Tyrone did get cheated on by Tandy, but it is a condition of her powers... As for all my other novels, nothing like NTR ever showed up... Anyways, no hard feelings or anything - I kind of think its funny that I now know how all those other authors feel when people point out the NTR in their novel which is actually not nTR.
2yr
2
The_Young_Flash
The_Young_Flash作者

Yeah, I see that now... But I like writing the drama and I don't wanna compromise my artform, so I'll just do me...

White_fluffy_ball:mature content is good and all but, most of the people here in webnovel are immature teenagers, especially in the fanfic section. So avoid using this concept if you can, else you will have to deal with these "NTR" spammers
2yr
1
White_fluffy_ball
White_fluffy_ballLv1

yeah... you do you then and ignore these people. keep up the good work 👍

The_Young_Flash:Yeah, I see that now... But I like writing the drama and I don't wanna compromise my artform, so I'll just do me...
2yr
2
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The_EnlightenedOne
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Great fanfic. Astounding writing, good upload rate, long chapters, and a good story. Although in chapter twelve he ruined the story by having his love intrist cheat on him. Fanfics aren't supposed to have drama like that. Kinda defeats the purpose in my opinion. Nobody wants to see the mc get cucked. Other than me just being stingy about that it is a great story that definitely deserves a chance.

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okaayyyyyy
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Great story. I'm looking forward to how you reintroduce his quirk. It's very interesting what you've done with this 'alter ego' of his. Where did it come from? Why is it so against heroism? Did it possess him? Whose blood was on his hand? Hopefully they'll be answered soon enough.

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trueidiocy_577
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wouldve been so much better if his permeation works on everything except the infinity stones and doesnt cause loss of stamin

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Lance557
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This is so good I don’t know what to say other than you make good drama and that is the only reason I stayed until chapter 15-18 were action started and I gotta say poor guys who dropped this before the action started

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