Seems machine translated, story is like any other naruto fanfic, mc is an uchiha, at the timeline of minato,etc. has a system that gives rewards and punishments

It is really fantastic, at first I thought it would be a Chinese cultivation novel, but surprisingly, it has a strong depth, it is well balanced between comedy moments (it has made me laugh a lot) and the serious moments are incredible, it really is one of the best naruto fanfic I've read, it reminds me of Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan.

At first I thought its same as always uchiha bloodline and all but then I really started to enjoy the Story ,Its enjoyable based on your taste

Cliche story with a sassy system. Not worth reading since half of sentences in any given paragraph is nonsensical or gibberish. Seems it's just another generic Chinese machine translated fanfic.

this ff has so much potential but ruined by grammars and wrong wordings. The metaphors used in the ff is not usually used in English so you have to think what the f. is the character talking about.

The story is not bad however the English is difficult to read. I was forced to correct the paragraphs in my head to read it. The system makes no sense as well and could be easily improved for example adding some info dumps explaining it would be a life saver. as the book is now I advise you not to read it until someone edits the book to make it easier to understand.

Its really hard to read this. I can like stand almost 30 chapters of it but can't go on any further. Its better than MTL but just a bit. Maybe if this story was editted and the grammars are much convenient to read then I might try again but right now I just can't

this fanfic is about an Uchiha with a system before the minato became hokage. the problem is it's mtl and it's unreadable because of the writing quality, you can't understand a thing.