read it, it's worth it, just do it, it's not that addictive honestly... yes not that addictive... ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎

The author just threw the whole first part of normal fan fiction into the trash and created an implausible character with an incomprehensible character and goals.

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the beginning is just horrible (extremely cringe), but if you force the first chapters, it gets better after about 8 or 9 chapters .........................................................................................................................................

Great story please dont drop. . . . . . . . . ... . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . . . .

If im being honest ive never watched RWBY but i feel the author explains enough and helps you piece other information together as you read. I feel the reationship between the MC and his girls was a bit forced to begin with but each of the harem members has such a likeable personality that im not even mad. The story overall is easily one of my favorite ones ive read on WN so far! Hope to see more works from you author! 😈

La historia promete pero el inicio es tan basura que no importa lo bueno que avanza la historia no la puedo ver bien y luego todo eso se descarta y se sigue como si nada, para que entiendas le da el tipico inicio de transmigrador que casi muere nomas spawnear con todo muy oscuro porque no sabe como desarroyar una historia de caracter serio sin darle algo tragico y oscuro que literal no aporta nada y viene sin aviso sinseramente todo el inicio oscuro no es necesario en una historia como rwby tenes cientos de formas de enemigos como grims que literal son mas coerentes para dar desarroyo podria decir mas pero creo que te haces una idea. No creo que cambie nada pero si te interesa comenta y tengo algunas ideas de como haces los primeros capitulos mas llevaderos sin que afecte demasiado a la historia y dar paso a oportinidades de desarroyo mas tarde. Suerte

Amazing character design so far not too many problems either. Yup yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup I yes yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yup yup

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