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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv123yr
2021-10-23 21:24

It is hard for me to read this, not that it is bad, I just don't understand why this was written. No suspense and no action, the characters are stereotypes and feel flat and most of all the MC has no personality at all. This would have been so much better if the MC hadn't transmigrated and didn't have a cheat. I would have loved to follow the exploration of a Cultivation world, but the system denies the reader the opportunity to truely immerse and learn something new.

Sign In Ten Years, Then I Am Exposed By My Gorgeous Senior

Ji Muhan
3.6
1518 Chs

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I'm 100% positive there are thousands possible name combinations in chinese language. Yet they always chose the name "Ye Chen"

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Dream_Seeker_729
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Flaneur1917
Flaneur1917Lv2

Translation: Either the author sure loves to repeat himself or it’s the by product of what’s obviously barely edited MTL. I feel the truth is somewhere in the middle. Characters: At this stage feel pretty one-dimensional, but interactions so far have been pretty light — who knows, they may gain some depth in the future (if this is picked). Word Building: Is as can be expected of novels of these kind, but again that could very well change in the future as this is only the beginning of the story. Overall: It’s okay — not great, but not terrible either. And it’s only 20 chapters, so why not give it a shot?

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Arduril
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I've read raws up to like ch 345... The story is very good in the first half, but then author decides to venture into Kingdom Building to pad the wordcount. Transcending Tribulation realm is where author's creativity plummets and he randomly decides to drop Cultivation World setting and transfer to pure fantasy with cultivators. Would not recommend reading, or wasting time TLing this.

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RobloxPlayer101
RobloxPlayer101Lv4

Hehehe imagine being so lonley you need to read harem, jokes aside, i pve never seen a decent harem book in my life and thats saying a lot.

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GrandpaPeng
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For me it's a no. Author writing some wet dream about 8yo surrounded by beauties (harem).............................................................

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Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv14

Hmmm... its rated at 3.92, lemme put it back to 3.8 where it belongs. Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash! Trash!

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Cyrs
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it's good? no will I keep reading this? probably Webnovel's standard of quality is so low lately that if novels aren't complete trash, I'm reading them. If this novel had been published a few years ago, I wouldn't have looked twice.

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Jarv_I_think
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why is webnovel just pummping out this trash I am a big fan of hidden dragon novels but this is just stupid 1 star ______________________________________

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Yami_01
Yami_01Lv4

This story is moving fast but content is top notch so reading it will be like wholesome. So read it and enjoy it give support to Author. It has a Good start and till now this story is fabulous but let's see how many chapters Author can make in a week.

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