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2022-03-09 09:45

The plot is very good and this story would way more interesting to read if weren’t for all the mistakes. Typos, pronoun switching, etc. make it hard to read

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sorry for that!

ShenDee90
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Yes, couldn't agree more. 🙂 But, anyway it's still a good job of the promising story for the author! 👏🏻 *clap clap*

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