Very entertaining. The biggest plus for me is that, unlike other similar novels, FL is also very strong but so far there is no "she's strong and smart, but he's stronger and smarter" cliché and I absolutely love it for this reason alone (you have no idea how many novel's I've dropped so far because this ML-must-be-better-in-everything-than-the-FL trope). The plot is so far ok, without major plot holes, but characters are rather superficial though very consistent, which is another big plus (FL doesn't change personalities nor becomes overly weak when ML is present). The greatest con is that many things are left out - like they're in the dressing room but in the same sentence he's pulling her in the car: the whole dressing, leaving the dressing room, going to the parking lot is left out and it's up to reader to solve the steps in between. Jumping trough the scenes happens quite a bit unfortunately, and it might get frustrating in the future, but in these chapters I've been able to overlook it on the account of the good plot and fast paced tempo in these 30 chapters (which I like since in many novels, one scene is stretched for days in short chapters, here at least the plot is going somewhere). Translation is very good, 1 or 2 strange sentences in 30chapters, but overall above average. I definitely recommend it and hope it gets selected!
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