Item: HP: A Legend Begins
Rating: 5

KingDovahkiin作者3yr

2021-10-09 13:04

For those who are reading this Fanfic, I would like to know how the writing is compared to the beginning. And also if I am managing to have any evolution as a writer. Constructive comments are always welcome.

HP: A Legend Begins

KingDovahkiin

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reader359841Lv4

After you translate in google translate...check the words In many places the word sister is written as brother and Wizarding world as Witches world. You can instead write it as Magical world like you use the world mage. The concept is good but you are rushing it too much and not explaining anything. I hope you improve.

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KingDovahkiin作者

Got it, I'm planning to edit the earlier chapters a bit more, and also check the recent ones, thanks for the feedback.

reader359841:After you translate in google translate...check the words In many places the word sister is written as brother and Wizarding world as Witches world. You can instead write it as Magical world like you use the world mage. The concept is good but you are rushing it too much and not explaining anything. I hope you improve.

3yr

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Author here, I would like to make it clear, that as I work all week, only weekends have time to write, so for now and these two days only that I can release chapters, thank you!

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Author here, I would like to thank everyone who has been supporting me in the writing of my fanfic, where I try to put stories that I think would be good in a different storyline. And about my first chapters that I've been seeing that there are a lot of people asking me to improve them, I will do that, but for now I don't have time, because my life is busy, but I will edit the beginning, to make it clearer and also to have a better intonation for reading, thanks for the support.

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