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2022-01-24 15:55

If you're going to have the MC adopt another child, what was the point if said child is constantly being left out?! So many times MC mentions how she's a mother of 3 (you mean 4, remember the other child?!). Said child disappears and reappears constantly, with 30-40 chapters passing with no mention of where he is or anything. So far she's left him behind in a market, during a raid of rioters, and the in the mountains! Like, I don't understand! The idea of the original storylines protagonist becoming the adopted brother of the three villains isn't bad, I like it! But the the author just continuously ignores or deletes his presence from existence in the story! What was the point? Personally, if I was that child, I'd go straight to the police and report my adopted mother for abandoned and neglect! Is the author trying to say adopted children matter less than blood-related ones?!

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