Review Detail of daygon_yuuki in Unforgettable Memoir (BL)

Item: Unforgettable Memoir (BL)
Rating: 5

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daygon_yuuki作者3yrdaygon_yuuki

The writer here. I spend a lot of time planning this so updated will be slow for the time being. Also, I will be focusing on the other two for the time being and this will be updated once a week. (Maybe twice if the reception is good) Hope you all give me plenty of feedback

Unforgettable Memoir (BL)

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PhoChamLv12PhoCham

It’s “BITE” the hand that feeds you, very important to get the English correct in your introduction or it looks sloppy. Needs a bit more detail in intro too or it is too confusing. It needs a bit more clarity - have someone edit if you can because your premise is interesting enough. Good luck .

3yr

daygon_yuuki作者daygon_yuuki

I will once I get time. Finally year is kinda getting to me now but thank you for your encouraging words

PhoCham:It’s “BITE” the hand that feeds you, very important to get the English correct in your introduction or it looks sloppy. Needs a bit more detail in intro too or it is too confusing. It needs a bit more clarity - have someone edit if you can because your premise is interesting enough. Good luck .

3yr