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ZA_WARUDO_
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2022-03-09 10:56

It was okay at the start. The mc gathering a group and joking around while slowly gaining talents. Not too fast nor too slow. The thing that bothered me is the fact that he has little to no development. He's stayed the same guy for 4 years and says the same jokes. He went to Kiri and got a innocent girl killed for nothing in return. He approaches her first and "Befriends" her but gets her killed. Poor girl was minding her own business till mc shows up and ruined her life. No regret or guilt coming from him after that as well. He also got off scot free from the girls dad aka the Daimyo simply because the daimyo hated the person that killed his daughter more than him. He goes back home and meets Naruto and nobody from Kiri is mentioned again.

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