A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read

you have made it both funny as well as emotional with right amount of realism as well as friendship and system for system lovers though not being overused. good grammar as well as a interesting plot song with good amount of words each chapter. thank you author for making such stories.

The MC, was great, but friend, he is a reincarnation of an adult, who has lived and suffered. even naruto who is childish has his limit. You write good, maybe ir you try yo develop your mc as something more than a joker. The history would be five stars

I think that it is good I can’t wait to see the friend group expand and the Mac getting stronger.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😗🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 keep up the good work

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It was okay at the start. The mc gathering a group and joking around while slowly gaining talents. Not too fast nor too slow. The thing that bothered me is the fact that he has little to no development. He's stayed the same guy for 4 years and says the same jokes. He went to Kiri and got a innocent girl killed for nothing in return. He approaches her first and "Befriends" her but gets her killed. Poor girl was minding her own business till mc shows up and ruined her life. No regret or guilt coming from him after that as well. He also got off scot free from the girls dad aka the Daimyo simply because the daimyo hated the person that killed his daughter more than him. He goes back home and meets Naruto and nobody from Kiri is mentioned again.

the catchphrase of the mc should be no one can fail better than me,,........................................................................