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Miataetae
MiataetaeLv13yr
2021-07-27 01:22

Wow, just wow.....your English is SO good, your style is amazing, your characters are so perfectly imperfect, i.e. they are so human and relatable, the story line is beyond suspenseful, the choice of words fits like puzzle pieces, I am astonished at such a quality book. you should publish it traditionally, I will buy it. Is this your first novel?

The Midnight Crime

Jia_K
4.9
181 Chs

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Jia_K
Jia_K作者

Thank you so much Mia. yes, It's my first novel, I am so glad you like it. I wanted to pitch a chance here before proceeding to publishing anything traditionally. Maybe my next work?

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I am giving this book 5 stars because there is nothing that I have found wrong about this book. For starters, the book cover is everything, though it's simple it draws you to the book. In my own opinion, this book and its storyline are worth reading.

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JulietwithoutRomeo
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Honestly, I have never seen a novel of this standard on Webnovel until now, the English is amazing, the descriptions are flawless, the characters are so beautifully crafted, the emotions are so raw and wonderfully written. I am so happy I found this gem, please do read this, you won't regret it.

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Amel_Parvez
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This book is just A M A Z I N G. From the very start the description is so vivid and wonderful. And I am really in love with this book and especially the characters😍😍😍 Jia u hv really done a GREAT job and I can't wait to read more of it!! And I would say that everyone should read this book❤❤

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SEP1A
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Wonderfully composed, a throughly engaging storyline to chew on and real-esque characters, this novel is marvellous. Throughout this masterful read, the writer’s control of sentence and paragraph structure have been a particular joy to me. I cannot wait to continue along Falcon’s journey!

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Queenlikealion
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Really, this is awesome. its soo fun. I just love your writing style, how you can put feels and emotions into words in just WOW. A really Awesome piece of literature. Love it, and all the best!

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DaoistBwZLlh
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This book is well written. Plot is amazing. Characters are well defined. Imageries used are wonderful, the reader gets a detailed image of the character's surroundings. One of the best page turners i've read. Loved it. Keep it up!

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RaitaxBiryani
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This book gave me a flavorful ride just like a plate of biryani with raita, making me fly through a heaven of rice and spicy chicken all the time fulfilling my appetite of just the right biryani. I AM IN LOVE, GIMME MORE 💜🤤🤤

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Maryam_Zahoor
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Amazing concept! The synopsis seems to be written by professional English writer. Will love to get more and more chapters with the best stability so your readers can be connected with it in the best way.

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