I think the fanfic is very good, but I think it lacks depth in terms of the relationship of the characters, it is very superficial in my opinion, try to make it deeper or explain more about the development of relationships. Another thing that I think you did wrong, the level of Frank and his class must be different, what do I mean by this, that when Frank is level 1000 (example) it will take him 100000000 (example) to raise his new class to lvl 2 recently , that has no logic. Ideally and I recommend that the exp to raise your normal level and that of your class be different, that every time you play a new class, to take it to max level, it takes the exp it costs to raise from level 1 to 100 (while rarer the class, more exp for your cap). And that the exp needed to level up continues to grow exponentially.
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