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Main_IslandLv33yr
2021-07-21 08:07

Had great potential of pursuing a great balance. It's actually welwell-written and the plot is well-structured No much comments about the grammar as it is decent

All Strings Attached![hiatus]

Scourgie
4.8
40 Chs

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Scourgie
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thank you very much for the feedback! I really appreciate it!💚

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Hey me! Just wanna drop in and give how I feel about my own story! At first I was pretty worried about writing a genuine romance and not relying on thriller to keep it from going so fast. But I honestly enjoy the slow burning progress these two royals are having! I really hope those reading this story enjoy it! Love ya and your support!💚

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The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. Although there are grammatical mistakes, they can be improved with the time. As they say 'Practice makes the man perfect'. But no doubt, this story has great potential. I love the smooth flow and especially the MC and her personality. I recommend everyone to read it at least once.

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Wonderful plot, great synopsis, and well written story. Premise of the story is quiet unique. Characters are well described. There are close to no grammatical mistakes. This work has a great potential. So, I totally recommend this book to everyone. Waiting for more updates.

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