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Matesanz
MatesanzLv52yr
2022-07-08 05:03

Awesome novel, great characters. The only issue is that I would love to get more chapters. Looking forward to Polaris development through HP story.

Polaris Black

mefait
4.8
32 Chs

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mefait
mefait作者

Sorry about that. I mostly started this for fun and to do when I’m and might have time. Though seeing how people actually like it I try update as often as I can but right now I’ more focused on studying since I have an exam I need to sit Thank you for the review!

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Matesanz
MatesanzLv5

Don't be sorry. I was just stating what I wish :). Obviously take the time you need for the chapters. And as always thank you very much for your this amazing novel.

mefait:Sorry about that. I mostly started this for fun and to do when I’m and might have time. Though seeing how people actually like it I try update as often as I can but right now I’ more focused on studying since I have an exam I need to sit Thank you for the review!
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mefait
mefait作者

This was started about a year ago, which I can't believe since it doesn't feel that long since I started. I started with nothing in mind just the name of the mc and the age differences between his siblings. With just that information I just went with the flow and wrote without thinking much, with no idea how to really write seeing as it was somewhat my first time trying to write a fanfic, mostly just writing creatively in general. I suppose ages ago, maybe eight months ago I stopped writing mostly because I wasn't really interested in the writing- well how it was written in a sense not too sure and the grammar too so I never really bothered because I wanted to edit it before continuing which I eventually did eight months later... I've edited the chapters taking some things out replacing it with other things, and changing dialogue and I'm still writing chapters to update once I've done one. Now I've got that interest back to continue writing curious about what will happen just as some of you might be, idk. I honestly don't have a vivid idea of what I want to happen, mostly just a vague idea of how it could end. I guess it's slow-paced which I didn't really intend to do like I said I just go with the flow but I guess most fanfics a much faster, my bad I get it I would want things moving along too. I guess low pace isn't for everyone, perhaps mine is 'too' slow pace idk everyone is free with their opinion. I guess it's rather a slow pace, it's definitely not close to a fast pace. I don't mind criticism, so feel free to comment or give honest reviews, I like hearing what people don't like about my fanfic, It helps me improve somewhat and know what I shouldn't do. Yeah and feel free to give ideas if you want, I'm open to ideas, I write with the flow anyways. Love interest is Amelia. No harem, never really got them or even know how to incorporate them properly into a story. I hope I don't lose interest again and don't update in eight months again. I'll try not to, though if I plan on dropping I'll say so, so you're not waiting on chapters or something.

2yr

mefait
mefait作者

Bare no mind, shameless author review. First of all, I thought it best to mention how this is somewhat a first for me, so I suppose you can expect mistakes. I'd appreciate any feedback whether it be criticism or not, it's quite helpful, so I know if I should edit things or not to improve the quality. To be honest, I feel as though I have been somewhat slow on updates which I apologise for, I'm on my second week of exams, which ends this Friday, so I'll try to post more often, for those interested. Thank you for your time, it's very much appreciated.

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Golias
GoliasLv5

very interesting, I'm not very fond of Ocs who don't know the plot, but the writer is good, so the story is really interesting, the protagonist's character is still in the making, I'll see what he will become first, but so far it's a very good story, you can see how much the author researched to create.

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Minbi
MinbiLv1

“Can I have some for please”+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14

i realy like this novel. MC is born in the black family and we see the prospective of a child born in a blood purist family. this is absolutely new! the story is well made and i could some times feel MC emotions, to the point where I nearly cried in some parts. The situation is well explained especialy the problems of the family and the relationship between its members. MC clearly feels human with his strong points and weakness. If it is continued it could become one of the best fanfic of harry potter, moreover the chaoter are rather long.

2yr
Hav3fun143
Hav3fun143Lv1

10/10 would highly recommend__________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Joueurviolet
JoueurvioletLv1

Alright so far, wish I could get more chapters in a day, —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-———

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