Review Detail of RayVer in Break the Void

A really interesting premise and execution that has plenty of potential. I've only read 4 chapters so far, however from what I've read it's been very enjoyable. I especially like the world building in use as well as the sense of mystery portrayed that provokes the reader to really think on matters such as the true purpose for why the organisation is making them participate in the events. As well as the limitations of the world they are in. A minor qualm and improvement that I'm sure that could be easily fixed, is the sudden appearance of something for the sake of the plot. I feel that at times the reason why something happens can be quite unnatural but I'm sure it can get better with practice. Overall, I would definitely reccomend you to pick this up as it's an excellent read.