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2021-11-16 02:02

That got disappointing really fast you are just using the template of original one piece and adding your mc's dialogue to make things boring you made him join luffy clue. The one piece world is full of criminals that he can hunt to be stronger but you made a ghost rider the spirit of vengeance into the to clean up their masses

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