I do not know whether it is deliberate or not, but by writing that they ignore him because he dont have destruction power you change their personality to something other than in the novel and anime. The Gremory family was known for their forbearance even in the anime, this shows in their dealings with Sairaog. After that you write that he is condemned to be a low-class devil, but everyone born in noble families is born a higher-class devil.

Things I hate about in this fanfic -Drama -His laugh "fufufufu" -Gregory is known for caring for each other, so on. but they neglect him because he dont has the power of destruction. -I want him to focus on the DXD world but it takes 50+ chapters for Dxd to show up -he needs from his family but he never loves his family(vergo so on) - it's hard to read not from grammar -annoying that's all. this is the second fic that is skipped over 50+ chapters.

Haven't read any of it yet, just wanted to point out that it says power of destruction is a gremory ability in the synopsis, it's actually a bael ability that sirzechs and ties have since venalana was a bael that married into the family. not criticism, just wanted to let the author know.

You know how this will read. The story is a power fantasy with an edgelord protagonist, the story has a case of world-hopping ADHD, and I think I would judge you if you took any lessons from this. On the other hand, the writing quality is fairly good and its fairly up-front about what it is. I’ve read to chapter 97 and a few problems stand out. The children act like adults, the characters are surface level with no real delth, the ever increasing herem means that most of the characters are narratively useless and exist only for fan-service, the world hopping means the main plot is ignored for 40+ chapters at a time and is replaced by a random B plot, and the story often reads like the inner ramblings of an edgy chunni with abandoment issues. In short, exactly what you expect. If you need a power-fantasy, then load up chapter one and leave your brain in the off position.

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So far I love it... You earned it

The novel is very good, the way it is written, the dialogues and the interaction of the characters are written well, in addition to the development of events and the course of the fighting, it is written with great skill, in short, in terms of the quality of writing, the background of the world, the development of the story and the updates deserve to get the full mark. This is proof of the skills and abilities of the author. But despite all of this, I will not continue reading the novel because how do I say this that the main character is a madman who is a psychopath in whom there is nothing to make me feel emotionally or respected for. He is a hypocritical, petty, stupid, arrogant idiot in every sense of the word. He kills tens of thousands of people for trivial reasons, r**p women, kills children and the weak just for his fun. In short, he is Doflamingo from One Piece. I wouldn't care about his death, or even the death of his crazy women or family, in fact, I wish they all died. He thinks himself to be the most pathetic person in the world. Yes, how painful it is that your family does not care about you when you own a palace and enough pocket money to live however you want. At the end of the talk it's the worst and dumbest Mc I've ever read in my life I hope the novel ends with his death because of 💩. I hope this novel falls and the author starts writing a novel in which the MC is not an idiot and cocky. I don't mean to insult or belittle the author's work in this review, and I hope that after this novel ends or is dropped, the new novel will talk about a natural presenter who is not a lunatic who enjoys murder, r*pe, and torture. Thank you and I wish you good luck. 👍👍

Everything in this fanfic feels forced, the interactions are weird and the background is nil everyone just seems to accept things like it is the simplest thing. It's not a bad fanfic just that i don't like it.

I came here literally because of the cover that depicting Venelana. So far absolutely disappointed. To be fair I just read through the Summary. and since It's clear you will not bang Venelana anytime soon or even maybe ever, well...

Had really high expectations came out super disappointed. I was expecting a DXD fanfic got that but about 3% rest of it is other stuff like I have no choise but to drop it. Really tried to read this one but couldn't. Author should have just said it was gonna have a sprinkle of dxd in it.