Dear author, I like the story. But please don't write on this website/app if you're looking to write something creative and unique. People, especially the "12 year olds", tend to favour cliche and mainstream plot. Hence why there's a lot of Harem stories while little plot driven story with decent character development. This is just a reminder of the consequences of writing fanfiction in this website. If anything else, keep your mind off these comments and focus on your own creativity. At least know that there are people, like us, who appreciates your work and enjoys it dearly.
KnowingAutumn
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