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Read something else dont waste your time, unless this is rewritten then I would give it a chance exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
MHA: Psychokinesis
KnowingAutumn
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LPummill3:This is a good story dont listen to what this Guy says he is just mad that the auther added a plot twist that makes the character a little weaker but it actually helps the plot
LPummill3:This is a good story dont listen to what this Guy says he is just mad that the auther added a plot twist that makes the character a little weaker but it actually helps the plot
I’m not mad just disappointed. The author spent the first couple of chapters making the MC into a op mf then uses a brick to limit his growth (A F’IN BRICK). If he really wanted to limit his growth he could of made the whole villian incident mess with him mentally and put a block on his future development by making him remember how he wasn’t strong enough or good enough to stop what happend (by making him freak out and not be able to focus enough to use hos powers, since it seems like the author wants to make the MC’s mentality as close to a regular 15 year old as possible). but instead... brick+strain=TUMOR (see how thats not even a plot twist just a weak reason to limit growth).