Author clearly improves in his writing over the chapters alongside a solid foundation for the story to be built on and a relatively in-depth look into Sho’s skills as well as his relationship with family and friends. Overall it makes you curious and is a good read and in my opinion a good background for the character, after all in Blue Lock, Ego mentioned why some of the best players come from poverty.

I so far enjoyed your blue lock series and it just started to enter the plot, I hope u can continue with both your blue lock and diamond no ace fanfic nogel with no problems. Thanks for the regular updates unlike other authors.

okay I've been following this book for a while and I'm surprised, the author is really good. you may not understand some things in the beginning but at the end it all makes, my advice is don't drop the book

Yo guess this will be my second review. Anyway this is a great story as with each chapter the author gets better and better, there might be a few errors or it may be too short but there are few blue lock fics and this is amongst the best. Definitely worth your time in my opinion.

oi what u doing, ur story is awesome, gimme more chapters XD. I wanna see he fanfic bloom and become great. I'm gonna change my review again later. anyway great story

yeas another blue lock fanfict i hope you can continue the ff, i like the story , i kinda missing some info( not important . iguess) maybe because i read it too fast

Honestly not bad this is going in the right direction this has alot of potential keepthe chapters coming man this is a five star in my opinion

Please write more regularly I've been following this story for quite a while and the first thing I di when I come from school is check if you update you don't understand how good this fanfic is as there is barely any good blue lock fanfic out there. ILL appreciate it if you write more

raed first 3 chapters n am enjoying fic, pls don't drop like other guy. raed first 3 chapters n am enjoying fic, pls don't drop like other guy.

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