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2021-10-10 22:48

Personally I think this story stands out from the others for the simple reason that it is not a novel and runaway plot,the author in my perception does not have the need that some writers have to throw everything in the reader's face and write something rushed and superficial. So if you're looking for a cohesive plot, light and calm I think it's the right plot type and I admit you have to be patient with the plot because a good book isn't always marked by multiple events running and that have shaken the plot, sometimes simple and separate chapters are necessary for the development of the character.

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I discovered this author from her first work The Toxic Deal which was a contemporary romance novel with Mafia theme. And I found her ideas interesting enough to not only keep me hooked but also look for her other works. And then came A Maze of Greed'. This novel is totally different from her first work. I was dicey at first to read a fantasy romance novel as it is not my cup of tea. But I trusted author's words and decided to give it a try. And boy, I was so right. I am glad that I took that decision or I would have missed such an amazingly structured story full of secrets and emotions. It is a rollercoaster ride for me as at some places it takes you on the highs of emotions and anticipation only to drawn you to the shallows to feel every pain and ache of every character. With more than a dozen of characters, author has successfully bonded her readers with every character. We feel their anger, we smile when they do and we feel their hurt. The vivid description of that historic setting and minute details of the backgrounds creates a whole play in front of my eyes as if I am watching a web series or a well written play. We are only 140 chapters into the story and it has just begun. But I never got a feeling that it is getting boring or slow paced. Every chapter has some moments- sweet and sour, simple and complicated. The way author has written the story is very engaging and she has done justice to every character. I am living those characters' journey and growing along them. I can see how gradually each one of them has developed and changed over the time. I would have wrote a whole essay about how I feel about this story, but I think I will keep it reserved for another review. Only thing I want to say to our dear Author is that- "DON'T STOP!" Your readers love your work and are eager to read more from you. All the best and hope to read more works from you along with this awesome story.β€οΈπŸ’•

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