Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Butterflies and Pins

The story is very adorable and memorable! It would be nice if this became a live action drama! The girl (Yoon-Yi) is memorable to women, and strike a nail to male readers. With the constant pacing of the novel, I'm sure this book would become popular soon! The only suggestion I'd like to point out is the descriptions of the emotions. In the first few chapters, Yoon-Yi was "sad" It would be nice if that emotions became a scene mixed with a dialogue to extract that moment to her and the readers. That's what I think. Kudos for the author!