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Yeah! The author here writing myself review, as shown on this site every fan-fic needs author made review so here I am. Anyway, thank you for all your support!

reading 3 chapters was my limit but after his "romantic" interaction with ashara it is simply impossible to read, disgust the MC his first sentence to a woman is that he wants to marry her for her appearance, even though everyone knows she is a slut who will betray him several times, disgust

House Trant doesn't have an Island their keep is Gallowsgrey. And the story is too rushed in just one chapter you wrote all the developments he did in years. You should have researched a little bit before writing a story dude and There are some grammer mistakes

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I prefer the premise of ur story here rather than your previous one I hope u develop this one more .... don't get me wrong I like both but prefer this it's more niche and unique

Love every asoiaf fanfic. The touch of green is not a new concept but the way it is used and the house background being not much is the more appealing part of this fic.

Its good and all, but author should get a editor or a proofreader. Words are often miss spelled and some words are missing that reading a paragraph is kinda confusing sometimes. Especially for a reader that only watch a couple of seasons that a sentence with a misspeled or a missing word can be super confusing. Its kinda ok at the beginning, but after ch 9. With the mess fast phase and no proper time skip(author only say ‘couple of months, couple of days’ that its confusing if a yr has past or why) combines with the misspelled and missing words. I become fedup with it that the story become allover the place to me.

It feel like the author have not set out any kind of a road map before he wrote the story, so it feel all over the place. As an avid reader of "Game of Thrones" this story timeline confused me to no end. The story itself is not too bad, wish fulfillment mosly....the only complaint for me is that the MC doesn't play it smart...he have magic but instead of keeping it as a hidden cards....he boasting it to the public instead.