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Mymylove06
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I really like the word you've created. Your main character is likable. I think there is some things you can improve on like your grammar and punctuation. But other then that this is a really cool story and I wish you the best of luck!

I Am A Ninja In A Cultivation Wold: Journey With My Futuristic Phone

Innocent_Author

Liked it!

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