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MasonicShadowXD
MasonicShadowXDLv152yr
2022-01-15 21:35

This is honestly just my personal opinion. I enjoyed the first 150 or so chapters, but the further it went the more conflicted the story felt. where I've left off there are alot of holes and confusing/conflicting concepts starting to go through the blender and it simply killed my interest in the story. Don't get me wrong I'm all for other worlds and magic/cultivation type things, i just feel like it was overstuffed, leaving a lot of loose ends that are essentially kicked out/cut by way of a time skip. the confusion then continues on from there with alternate dimensions as well as other worlds, not to mention the whole "this is all a book/novel come to life", so along with confusion we also now have multiple main characters. so to sum up my opinion it had a pretty great start, but, the overall story afterwords just kinda went nuts in a confusing and un-enjoyable way (for me). I still advise others to give it a look at the very least but im out. stopped at ch.340

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Mr_N00B
Mr_N00BLv13

Same here. I am 329 chapter and this multiple main character things getting on my nerve. it seems that main character is just a tool for the writer here. May be author will later make it more convenient but so far it's a bit irritating.

Chef_Mandie
Chef_MandieLv1

ugghhh...and I thought it wouldn't get worse! at 198 I'm already fed up. so sad to see this potential gem turn out like this

Karate_master_b
Karate_master_bLv1

Made it to 326 and I agree with the point about that the mc is just being used as a kind of tool and the rest of MC's

Alex_Mirabile
Alex_MirabileLv14

The whole s*x pill just made me pause to look at review to check if it's worth it.. Just wondering, did the wife appear yet at 300+? :')

Karate_master_b:Made it to 326 and I agree with the point about that the mc is just being used as a kind of tool and the rest of MC's
Alex_Mirabile
Alex_MirabileLv14

The whole s*x pill just made me pause to look at review to check if it's worth it.. Just wondering, did the wife appear yet at 300+? :')

Karate_master_b
Karate_master_bLv1

No sign of here yet

Alex_Mirabile:The whole s*x pill just made me pause to look at review to check if it's worth it.. Just wondering, did the wife appear yet at 300+? :')
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Venerable_Linfeng
Venerable_Linfeng作者

Time for a shameless review. Here, there will be some answers about the story. 1. Will there be a harem? Answer: No there won't be. 2. Will the MC get younger? Answer: Yes, he will get younger physically. You know, since he cultivates immortality, the stronger he gets, the younger(physically) he will be too. (Quasi-spoiler?) 3. Will it be updated regularly? Answer: Yes, it will be updated regularly. But sometimes, there may be a reduction. 4. Is his system annoying? Answer: No. His system is the silent type. Generally, it doesn't talk, it only gives out text. 5. Will the system force the MC to do something? Answer: No. It will at best put a mission. There may be penalties in the future, but fret not, those penalties won't threaten the MC's life nor his power. 6. How does the system work? Answer: This system won't force the MC to do anything as I said above. The only way the MC can get stronger is by cultivating strong people. But maybe there will be a slight change to it in the future. Btw, he also gets stronger by cultivating himself too. 7. Is the MC stupid? Answer: Lol, in almost all novels, MCs are not stupid. My MC is an old monster, therefore, he's not stupid. The side characters are not people who will come to provoke the MC straight out like a fool too. 8. Will there be face-slapping? Answer: There will be. But there won't be the generic face-slapping like you see in some novels where it was displayed once per 2/3 chapters. 9. How is the world background? Answer: With just the synopsis, genre, and tags, you can guess it yourself. 10. English is not my first language, so there will be mistakes inevitably, but I will try to reduce them as much as possible. 11. You, yes you, my readers, don't forget to vote for my novel too!!!

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