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I'll be honest it was sorta hard to read what you wrote. The idea was solid but there was alot of stuff you could've done to spice it up and the way you make each character talk is really out of place. Nearly every person has said 'guy' and have talked similarly to one another. The story is ok but could be better executed.

DC: The Male Amazon

JokerHighJack

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Thanks yeah im currently working on it appreciate the feedback. Im actually currently trying to edit what you are talking about however it will not let me update. But thanks for the feedback i hope you continue to read as i get better.