I'm not gonna update daily maybe one's a month anyways it's ok for negative comments but let me remind u English is not my first language and I'm just a newbie in this writing stuff

didn't read it yet but will you be the one to break the curse? every author I see writing about becoming a greek god failed, never passing the 11th chapter mark.

Say that I am wrong but isn't this story stolen? I mean the plot is the exact same as that other Posidon fanfic. I mean you have changed some parts by making him more op. Like you added in the wish fulfilment on top of that other story. So it at least isn't a copy and paste. I would also say this isn't done as well. The other one is more fleshed out. Overall at least it isn't just fully stealing the story but because it is obvious you took that other story as a base. Should you not give credit to it in the synopsis?

When the MC sees girls, his mouth waters...literally, this MC is gross. He cant even look at woman without getting horny, some may like it but if you dont like gross horny MC's who are FUCKING CENTURIES OLD who are into 2 year olds then this isnt for u. The MC gets turned on by little children when hes a old man....disgusting.

As you can see, both the author and the mc are desperate pedophiles. This is seen when the mc sexualizes children that are days old and he makes his weird-ass system call him "darling". I'm convinced the author owns a white van with tinted windows man

Reveal spoiler

Been reading this since the release, ND here's my review whether it's worth the time or not. Some are exaggerated like the time he trained, but it's okay because, this is just a fan fic. The character development is so so.. All in all, it's worth to read if your searching for something fun and about wishes. But for long term, nah.

I believe in your 😃😀😃😀😃😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

i have to say this novel has potenciel but why u dropped, don't lisent to haters, this is ur frist time so chill bro, i hope u continue this novel

Solo leí el cap 0 y el primero... Después del cap 0 ya tenía ganas de dejar de leerlo, pero igualmente continúe con el pensamiento de "aunque el personaje sea un Dios 'Superior' con todo ese poder, el debería esforzarse para conseguirlo"... Pero cuando leí que el MC tenía (7) deseos casi me perdí, pero aún continúe creyendo que serían deseos no OP, pero en el deseo 4 dónde pide un sistema lo dejé... Demasiado absurdo ganará tanto poder por nada, es demasiado loco.