Review Detail of Lagash in Dominator In Naruto

the cringe is awful, the anime world vibe is non-existent, hmm simply put let me describe how i feel reading this fiction, imagining madara who acts like Might Gai which does not match his vibe in turn does not feel like madara which make everything seems fake right? this is just an extreme example, i am not saying that madara in this fiction acts like Gai. But everything the vibe is not there, like this fiction has no soul and empty which so many unrealistic character whom does not give the same vibe.