Review Detail of proking in All Time Marksman

To be honest, the start of the novel was not so good...the vocabulary needs improvement too, dialogues didn't looked good...in the first two chapters, it still hasn't explained what is going on. Who is the mc? what is Mythical Realms 😂? I might die out of suspense. On top of that, character introduction n design was not so good. Respected Author, you need to work on that too. some scenes are not explained well...in short, the work is done in an effortless manner. It needs re-editing so that it can show some great work which our author shown in previous novel lol. I hope author is not joking with us by presenting such novel with his current skills lol. I'm expecting great results in future. Hope you edit it soon 👍