your grammar needs work, the pronouns are sometimes plain wrong. You also need to separate your paragraphs, it makes it difficult to maintain the reader interested with long never-ending paragraphs (well at least in my case). The story itself has potential and we can see that is a bit different from other ff, so good luck!

The grammar is horrible I'm having a hard time understand what going on most of the time._.._.._.._.._.._.__....._____........._____________...................____._.

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I am just going to say that the author is too good at writing cuz many people that I recommended this book were not able to understand many parts of the chapters but I have to say that this ff is entertaining for most part. Just the writing quality was way above my league at first but after a few chapters it was alright for me to understand it. So i will seriouly recommend u guys to atleast read it till 10 chapters before dropping because of not understanding the way of writing of the author🙃😊

This is a Fairy tail fan-fic. So yeah,the world background and powers are all there.I don't know if this ff is authors original or a copy, but the idea is interesting. But i wont recommend this ff to anyone untill and unless its been edited. If you’re asking what the problem is i'll say its about the grammar. Don't get me wrong, i've read and enjoyed many ff with bad grammar. But this one is in its own league. Let me give you an analogy,with a male example. Suppose today is your wedding. You're having a destination weeding. All of your friends and family are present. Now you come to the stage, with a dashing expensive suit BUT!! instead of shoes your wearing a cheap flip flop!!! Yeah,imagine that. This pair of flip flop is going to ruin the weeding. The horrible grammar ruins this ff. So yeah, if this is fixed i would recommend this book otherwise don't torture yourself. Or if you’re an M then go ahead i don't judge 😉

The story is very interesting. But like most people who actually read the story to review, the grammar is atrocious. It's very hard to read, and most of the time you wouldn't even know what is going on. But if you have the time and will to invest to understand then the story is interesting, thus the 4star review. Author please try to get someone to help you with the grammar, or even simply use grammar tools like grammarly. The other thing that bothered me was the long paragraphs. Felt like reading a research paper, very headache inducing I tell you. And finally using hypens (-) to write quotes or talking instead of using quotation marks "".. It's really annoying. Other than all this, has a lot of potential.

Hey Arthur dude how come you’re not rain more of your Fairy Tail: God Slayer - The Path of Life and Death! I was really hoping to see what happens at the end of your book looks like a pretty good one? i’m really hooked onto this book I would love to know how it ends and know what happens more if you possibly can write more chapters one day soon I hope you get to see more of this soon cause I’m dying to know how does it end also Does he ever learn to control his powers?

- bad grammar - the dialogue between the characters is so badly written that it's hard to understand ---------------------------------------

In fact, for a person whose main language isn't English (The author is from Russia, and English and Russian are very different in many ways. It is much easier to translate English text into Russian, and not vice versa), the job has been done quite well. Good luck and more inspiration[img=recommend]. P.S. Author, find someone who knows much better English than you. I read fanfic in the original language, but you have a lot of people complaining about grammar here.