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Raven_Bailone
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2021-02-16 17:34

Omg can't believe I've seen this so late! I love the MC! I love the story progress! And I just adore the pairing! If you like action, yaoi, romance, and naruto, this fanfic is for you. But seriously this is a well-constructed story, the story pace is slightly fast but still easy to follow along. More importantly, I love how you've sprinkled little romantic moments rather than fully focusing on them, the slow pace and genuine exploration of their relationship are wholesome and adorable. I further adore the way you integrate the elements of family, romance, and action nicely, and everything flows and isn't disconnected or forced. Honestly, hope you continue to write this story/Fanfic.

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Blue_neko
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Thank you, yes I will 😊

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