Item: Unleash The Assassin [BL]
Rating: 3.8

BlackFluteofLoveLv23yr

2021-01-02 15:38

The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.

Unleash The Assassin [BL]

EricaPugh

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62 Chs

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