Just another reincarnation story, so if you have good ideas, suggestions or just complains let me know. I think this story could become something great... Feel free to write some comments and reviews! And don´t forget to stay healthy!
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LIKEInteresting interesting. Will keep it in mind. Had a similar idea anyway, but it will take a lot of chapter till he reaches the size of a mountain or bigger. Appreciate your comment.
Steven_Couch:Him eventually becoming a legendary mythical snake the size of a mountain would be interesting. A swing of his tail being able to destroy entire mountains... I might be comparing him to Tailed Beasts to much lol. He's no Kurama and it's not like he'll be able to shoot blasts of Mana.
Ehh it is literaly a reincarnation story, meaning he reincaranted as a snake, like the title said... He was reborn as a snake!? What do you not understand?
Len_Stoff:Nothing is clear, the story is about a snake, but no time is given to it at all, he somehow got a body? This was not said anywhere, this nonsense is impossible to understand
if you are wanting to take this down the western fantasy path then it definitely should have involvements of dragons, human forms, and special skills specifically for his race. hope mc isn't a total reject though. read too many novels that had great potential but the mc was just stupid and never changed which ruined the whole novel for me. will you be scrapping this later or do you plan to actually keep it going? I don't want to start reading and it gets stopped later. specially since there aren't very many chapters out yet
I will not drop this, but uploads will slow sometimes and quicken on other times. And for the western fantasy, read and see for yourself if it is already western enough for you.
SpcBrokaw:if you are wanting to take this down the western fantasy path then it definitely should have involvements of dragons, human forms, and special skills specifically for his race. hope mc isn't a total reject though. read too many novels that had great potential but the mc was just stupid and never changed which ruined the whole novel for me. will you be scrapping this later or do you plan to actually keep it going? I don't want to start reading and it gets stopped later. specially since there aren't very many chapters out yet