Review Detail of amaturewriter in Reborn as a Villain in Tales of Demons and Gods

heads up 5 chps in..... CD is more or less completely bland. MC is harem seeking...thats his goal. [ tag not there ]. other than that no personality. he does what OG MC did, to get one chick, and also another [ a heiress and a manager at the alchemy place ]. I wouldnt call MC smart cause he is following nei lie but not completely cause he dosnt want to [ my guess follow cannon. ]. CD as I said before is practically no existent. the MC fks the alchemy chick for the first time within hrs of meeting cause she drunk and she totally fine..no depression, or normal reactions. plot forced I guess. MC also does what nei lie did to get the chick with the illness. He has no purpose or proper/interesting goals....he has OP power [ the library thing, libary of heavens path or something. srry if I am wrong, idk the name ] and becomes OP fast. Theres also the fact that MC alters cannon and yet everything happens exactly like that... ie: MC is the shen dude but dosnt antagonize with nei lie, he dosnt allow argument with neilie and teach to happen and he steals an artifact from the treasure hunt, prevents nei lie from showing off, he prevents interaction with sick chick... and yet cannon still follows. like sure, they aint that big but they were major plot points. its stupid to think cannon still follows. overall .5 chps in, CD is just not there.. a normal TDG FF with MC focuses on getting chick and gets them by doing what nei lie did, and following cannon. becoming OP fast cause of goldfinger