The story is interesting in the beginning and started run in circle with super slow development of the characters, no issues that pick the curiosity and becomes predictable. You can skip 20-30 or more and it still in circle. Too many characters being introduced without giving significance to the plot. If there is good point in the story is the writing quality.
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Thanks for the review. However, I would like to point out that it's a slice of life story. It's meant to be slow. But thank you for giving it a try
Miss/Mr. Author, just a suggestion with regards to slice of life stories. I've read a lot of them and they are my comfort books but yours seem to focus more on other characters' lives..The problem comes from how the more we go on with the story, the more you give more chapters and emphasis to these characters thus slowing down the story and giving less time to the main characters we already invested feelings with. I don't know about others but what I like about slice of life stories was the gradual growth and betterment of the main character as she/he lives everyday. Also, make it interesting. For example, a book about farming where the MC starts planting simple plants and then gradually evolved to rare plants and new variants of plants. There is excitement and growth in it. But yours seems stagnant with most of the time they are just having fun like eating dinner together or going on to dates. Honestly that's boring when it always happens. There is a lack of growth, yours though focuses more on emotional growth. Let's go back to my first point. Imagine a slice of life book about farming then after a hundred chapters, from a few chapters here and there will be chapters about the lives of other farmers. It's okay if they are interesting but if they were just talking about their daily lives, it would hardly be interesting especially if we're not still done with the MCs life.I really love your other books and I like that you hardly insert other characters chapters like in this book in those books but I'm really considering dropping this book but I don't want to because I have already fallen in love with the MC and ML. I am genuinely invested with how they are gonna grow and prosper.
XiaoMeeHee:Thanks for the review. However, I would like to point out that it's a slice of life story. It's meant to be slow. But thank you for giving it a try
