That was a fun read~ 💖 I could tell that the Author had really improved a lot when comparing this to his first book. Both the grammar and the flow is a lot better. I did notice a few mistakes like lack and misuse of punctuation, repeated words, and typographical errors. But since they are minimal, they are easily missed and did not hinder my immersion. ✨ The concept is quite daring. Set in a world with magic and modern technology, the main character is on a journey to the top while exacting his revenge. I think this book has great potential if developed carefully. And I believe that the author is doing a great job so far. 🎉 Keep it up, Author Seven! 🥂 And more power to you~! 👏👏👏

Another Good Novel from our jesting Author. It's not another isekai novel you can find anywhere. It's a cliche starting novel written in a very new way with the author's funny imagination. Good writing, straight to development without almost no grammar mistakes. Although I know a lot of readers bored with the isekai novels, give it a try. I am sure You will not be disappointed. What does that Itsuki say? ~~nya

Forgive me for my bluntness in this review. I really do not have a personal grudge against the author; he is actually one of my good friends. And honestly, besides the writing quality portion, the review isn't much of a roast. Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American. Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record. Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled. Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live. World Background: Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced. Work hard, Ansu chan (seven)!

Great work, Author, the hype around this book has been unquestionable and I should admit that this book made me both eager to get my hands on it and I enjoyed every page... Please upload more chapters, I am waiting for it.. Hope your work should get a big hit and massive votes...

the story was good but before you get into this novel im at chap 61 and the story is done settling its premise since its slow read atleast were im at because it wont immediately hook you and the synopsis made me not want to read it but give it a try

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Seven has done some amazing work so far and, from what I have read of this new project, that streak of awesome bossness is not going to end anytime soon. Keep up the good work Seven and may the Seven Sages of seven millennia bring glory and honor to this webnovel.

Another story from the shameless author but this shameless author's novels are always truly appreciable. l have read the given chapters nd so far it's a amazing story with as funny ML. Sad people should definitely give this a try(cough...not like other can't). So set ur seat belt nd get ready to read this nyaa~~ novel nd torturous life of ML becoz this author luv to torture his ML nya out~~ (well kick this nya out😏)